Main Task - Editing - First Draft

This is our first draft, with the feedback received from our teachers, Hannah and myself have agreed the beginning definitely needs re-filming in a different room with better lighting and camera angles for dramatic effect. We have also agreed that the opening credits should overlap the opening sequence of the letter. This will create more visual stimuli for the audience and also create more content, benefiting both Hannah and myself.

We're both unsure about the music for the stalking section, it seems unfitting. We shall both pursue a new track which is copyright free for this section. Our teachers had pointed out that the end of the film cuts out rather abruptly. This can be fixed with a straight cut to black by adding a black title at the end of the footage.

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